Howdy!
Today for the #BlogBattles, Rachael has suggested something different seeing as how it’s the one year anniversary of the Battles! Any Battler can take a story from the past year, edit however and re-post. I’m feeling very un-original right now and am not going to touch my submission. It’s one of those where I wasn’t sure about at first but then I really ended up liking it.
This is from Week 21
The word was EYE
Genre: Fantasy
My Mind’s Eye
There is a place
Where worlds are born
All in my mind’s eye
There is a place
Where heroes rise
And villains fall
And simple men hear a call
All in my mind’s eye
There is a place
Where hope is lost
And love is won
And battles rage for a kingdom
All in my mind’s eye
There is a place
Where swords are forged
And spears are cast
And dragons breathe a fiery blast
All in my mind’s eye
There is a place
Where brothers stand
And sisters fight
And family bonds are tight
All in my mind’s eye
There is a place
Where the world is right
All bathed in light
All in my mind’s eye
[…] Eye by Claire Banschbach […]
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Wonderful. I must have missed this first time around but I wasn’t around off and on last year. Fantastic! 😀 ❤
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Thanks! 🙂
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This is beautiful. Writers have such awesome cosmic powers in the worlds we create. Thanks for articulating it so well. 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂 Glad you enjoyed it.
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Lovely – particularly love the last stanza.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Love this!
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Thanks! 🙂
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Very nice. Bravo, well done!
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Thanks, Grace!
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Beautiful description of the power of the imagination. 🙂
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Thanks! 😀
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Magical poetry. Loved it the first time too. 🙂
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A very epic fantasy feel to this piece! I love it.
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Thanks! Glad you liked it. 🙂
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